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PICK UP & PROGRESS! That is what I want all of you to be doing! Pick up what is good and progress on your own creativity as well as reading. This is where pupils can put up their composition pieces for others to read and comment on. This will help them improve their creative writing... :-) Pupils can also upload their recorded Oral Reading as a video file and others can listen and give comments.
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- Two Best Friend (by Ong Jing Yi)
- 2nd Group of Oral Practice
- An Accident In The Park-Nasrullah
- Oral Practice by 4 Honesty
- The Ghost That Haunted the Village (by Zeeshan)
- A Genuine Mistake (By Nur Nabilah)
- A Greatful Boy (by ken lim)
- Tommy's First Gift (Writen by Aiman)
- The Murder ( written by Juzar.M.Heera)
- Haunting George (By Nur Diyanah)
- The archer and the warrior who killed the darkness...
- A Nightmare (by Chen Yang)
- THE BOILED PRAWNS AND THE QUEEN OF DARKNESS (By Nu...
- The Grave House (By Lee Kia Wee)
- The Boy That is Always Late For School (yuehean)
- One special ring (By Ken Lim)
- The noisy family (Nur Irsyad 4 Honesty)
- Football Mark (By Wenyao)
- The Coachman Who Could Paint Very Well (By Mah Yon...
- How Singapore Got Modernised (by Syafiq)
- The Race By Hanif
- An unknown mystery(Satria)
- Father Time And His Pattern Behaviour Book (by Sha...
- The Hilarious Rat (by Nur Syahirah)
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109 comments:
Umm miss safiah i only know that yue hean's voice was not clear.....
It is all right Satria because I have not given any rubrics to you. Just listen for leisure as of now.. :-)
Hi!
Nabilah,i cannot hear you at all!You're mumbling!
Nabila voice is too soft if she can speak louder it is good
nabilah was in a gibbrish tone but she still can improve
Hi!
Caleen,you're okay but speak louder
Nabile is too soft
irsyad's is very good.I really like it very much.Good job irsyad.
JIa Jia recording is Hillarious at the begginning.....................
nabila speak too soft.
yue hean has a boring tune but I think he can still improve
I agree weith syafiq and so is Henry he was mumbling.
By ShahrulAbbas
good Caleen you have the up and down tone good job!
kia is wee very loud and clear
-nas
caleen voice was quite ok she could improve
nabila speak too soft.
You have to speak louder caleen
-Minjun
Karisma's Reading is great but it doesn't sound like her voice
Chen yang, you are in a straight tone only
Hi,
erms...hanif....there is some problem with ur mouth....once u say a word...u will stop for a moment...pls inform that....
nabilah speak too soft and elaine speak with no intonationand she is very soft like nabilah.I think she can improve by speaking louder if oral comes u wont get good marks...~to nabilah and elaine so far all my friends can speak with intonation and speak clearly.Most of them can speak like a british essence...
Yue Hean ... You don't have any expression in your voice...........
Chen Yang your voice is too soft like Nabilah if you can speak louder that is good
nabilah's voice too soft seriously.. :-(
You need to speak louder caleen the anonymus was me.
emrms....
nabila voice is too soft pls inform that....
chen yang-his voice was different from his voice
yi yang- his voice was quite ok
yue hean-to gibbrish
Nabilah speaks too soft and a bit mumbling.
Elaine
Nabillah you are speaking too softly. Try to speak louder and clearer.
Hello!
Ken, I heard your speech and I had detected two mistakes and you have a straight tone and the name is Marthav.
Nabilah you if you speak louder it will be better.
Jing Yi pick great story but she she could still improve on the way she pronouce.......................
Good Job Yi Yang
Irsyad's voice is loud and clear
:-))))))))))))))
NICE JOB!
caleen voice is good
yeah!i agree with satria that yue hean was mumbling and i think that the best sound recorded is Kia Wee's story as I can hear every single word that he is saying.Well done and kp up wth ur gd wrk!
To:Elaine
Hi this is Goh Yi Yang!Your story is very good but your reading is to fast.Try to slow down a little and i think your recording will be better and nicer!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
From:Goh Yi Yang
all of ur oral speakings were good but some were to soft,some were mumbling and some were speaking to fast.i hope u all can improve.
caleen voice is very good.
hi ken you here??? you have some mistakes ...
good job anyway
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every one did a good job...i know why some of them sound like they are mumbling...but there are reasons...first maybe there is some technical problems or they are syh or lazy...keep up the good work! i know u can do better!!!
good day everyone!
;) mega
Nabillah you are speaking too softly. Try to speak louder and clearer.
kia wee i heard every single word you say.keep it up
Hanif,your voice is loud and clear.
chen yang pls speak louder.
Elaine-Your voice was soft.
Nabilah-You need to speak louder.
Yue Hean-Not so loud and I can hear you mumbling.
Kia Wee-You were good.
Irsyad-You were good.
Yue hean!
You're making a loud noise!Ummmmm you need to make a right tone!
yi yang...
i frgot to tell u something ur voice look like a little bit soft.....and tha anoymus is me i have forgoten to write my nam....zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
elaine-she could do better
hanif-hi voice was ok
yong xuan-her voice was ok but she could do better
henry-technical problem
nabilah's voice is too saof.you should speak louder
hey kiawee your voice is good but you pause alot..
nice work
ooo i agree with everyone..
Caleen's voice has like a echo but its loud and clear i think if oral she can get full marks
henry's has a technical problem
Henry i cant hear a thing expect
high speed sounds
From Yi Yang
Yue hean,your story is very good!But i can't hear your voice clearly and i think you are mumbling!!!!!!!!!!
To:Yue Hean
Nabillah you are speaking too softly. Try to speak louder and clearer.
Yi yang your oral was very good.
Need more expresions,Nabilah
Cheng Yang's voice is very soft and he is mumbling.................
i like caleen's recording as it is very clear to understand what is she saying.
Nur Syahirah
Henry you must record your voice again because there is technical problem.
Aiman's voice is same as henry's ....high speed voice
irsyad-he was great
aiman-technical
jia jia-technical problen
kia wee is reading is great
Nabila,I need to say this,YOU WERE MUMBLING AND I COULD NOT HEAR YOU AT All.YOUR READING COULD BE BETTER IF YOU READ LOUDER.
diyanah
aiman voice is ver ysoft i cuold only the background sound
i cant even get a word from jia jia's recording
for Jia Jia's recording I cannot understand atleast 10 words as I think that there is a technical problem...
Nur Syahirah..
Nabila!
Your speech is very soft. I think you are mumbling. Like I can not hear a word.
Nabilah your voice is soft try to speak louder.Limlijun
jing yi-she was great
ken-he had no tone
kiawee-his voice was great bgut con improve
it was loud and clear.good job!, Caleen
Nabila- you need to be slower.
Caleen- It is okey.not too fast, not too slow.
Chen yang- He is like mumbling. Like I can't hear anything
Yi yang- Too fast! You need to be slower
Yue hean- Too loud. please be softer.
Elane- I think you are mumbling and too fast.
Hanif- You are too fast. please slower a bit.
Mah Young Xuan- Very good, but you are like mumbling.
Henry- You are like mumbling.You need to be louder.
Irsyad- I like it. But it is too fast.
Karisma- Very good but too soft.
Aiman- I cannot hear even a singel thing.
Jia Jia- Good but you stops somethimes.
Jing Yi- Too slow. you need to be faster a little bit.
Kia Wee- Too fast. It will be good if you slower down.
Yue hean you speak like you was falling asleep.
Yue hean you need to speak with intonation pls.
Yue hean you need to speak with intonation pls.
callen your voice is wonderful.
Elain you could slow down, it's too fast.
From:yi yang
your story is not quite clear!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Ken your recording is nice. Good work keep it up
Elaine you speak too soft and fast I cannot hear you clearly.
Hi Lee kia wee
I heard that you are loud and clear but your expression is missing.
Need more expresions and pronouns better
Hanif good story it is loud and clear.
Hanif you could pronouce properly.
Nabilah's voice is too soft
aiman- not so clear
Yong Xuan you speak too soft.
nabilah- speak louder
caleen-keep the good work
chen yang- louder
yi yang - a bit slow
yue hean-technical problem
elaine - soft voice
hanif- too fast
yong xuan- high and low voice
irshad- best
karisma-nice
jia jia - don't stop too much
jing yi - the word affair spell wrongly
ken- good
kia wee- good
Nabilah's voice is too soft
yong xuan you speak with high and low pitch, keep up the good work.
it was not neccescery for reapting the boy who ate alot and sleep".
I cannot hear you Henry can you speak louder.
Caleen's is too fast
Jing yi- a few mistakes
Jia jia- not flowing
Jia Jia, u read n pause n read n pause,and i don't know wat u r saying.
Kia wee you are exellent
good Yisard.
Hanif
Your voice is straight and you have no mistakes
very good oral irsyad.
normal.
Caleen, your reading is too fast but it is clear.
Irshad you have a lot of expressions.
good job!, Hanif
karisma you forgot to read out your title
Karisma your recording is good
Ken,your voice is very soft.
Jing Yi, u have a few mistakes.
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