Thursday, June 26, 2008

Two Best Friend (by Ong Jing Yi)

One sunny day, when my teacher tells us to take out our book my forgetful friend forgot to take to school. Then she tells the teacher about it. When the teacher hears about it she was very angry because my friend sally forgot to bring her book. My teacher scolds her.

When it was afternoon I and sally go to see the cca board. We see that there are no cca. Sally said she want to go my house because my mother is not at home so I said she can go my house. So we go to my house. Sally was very happy.

When we got home we talk about what happen at school sally said she was very sad. After saying we play many thing, computer, Ds,…When it was five o’clock sally must go home. When she got home she call me. She said tomorrow she can come.



The next morning went my teacher tell us to take out our math books Sally forgot to take to school again but this time her teacher never scold her. She tell sally that her mother call to tell my teacher that she forgot to take her book to school and she bring it to school.



When it was go home time sally and me saw a women calling sally. Sally tell me to go home and later she will come so I go home. Sally call me and tell me she could not come. I wonder why she could not come.

The next day I ask sally why she could not come. She say her mother don't let her come. I ask who is your mother she said yesterday that women is my mother she said yesterday that women is my mother. I am glad you tell me she say it nothing we are best friend.

12 comments:

Anonymous said...

wow nice story..

Anonymous said...

many mistakes.i did not like it.

Satria said...

mabye i agree witt zeeshan

Anonymous said...

there are many mistakes

Anonymous said...

i quite agree with them





Shahrulabbas

sYaHiRaH said...

there are quite a number of mistakes but a very pleant story.

Mystery Guy said...

many mistakes in your story, please correct all the mistakes.

Mystery Guy=Aiman

Anonymous said...

alot of mistakes.I agree with ZEESHAN.but i like your effort.

Anonymous said...

thank for your coments

Anonymous said...

thank for your coments

ken lim said...

nice story. I guess it will be good if you write more than 2 friends.

Anonymous said...

The story is good!