Tuesday, June 24, 2008

The Murder ( written by Juzar.M.Heera)

One day, a famous detective of Singapore, Martin, was solving a murder case. The person murdered was actually his friend Kelvin. Kelvin was only twenty years old.

When Martin arrived at Kelvin's house, he saw that Kelvin lying on the floor with a knife poked into his chest. He turned Kelvin and saw that the knife was sticking out from behind. Martin declared Kelvin dead. Martin also fond out that Kelvin was only facing his head upwards to the wall. Martin looked upwards to the wall to see what was so special.

To his shock, Martin saw a sentence written with blood. The sentence was, “No one is able to save Kelvin now. Ha! Ha! Ha! My worst enemy is now dead.”

Suddenly, Martin saw more words appearing. The words made a paragraph. It was the most scariest and shocking case of his life but he still had to complete it.

After a few hours, he found that the words were appearing with the help of a projector hidden under the sofa. Martin was glad that it was not a ghost.

Now the last step was to find the murderer. Martin became very anxious to find the person who had murdered Kelvin.

As Martin was walking home, he noticed somebody following him. Martin quickly ran to his house and rushed to his room.

While the person was following Martin home, another famous detective of Singapore, Tommy, saw them. He also tried to follow them.

After a few minutes, Tommy saw Martin go into his house and the person following Martin go to the back of Martin’s house. Tommy followed Martin to his room but Martin was still not aware of Tommy.

A few minutes later, Tommy heard a sound of a bullet being shot. Tommy dashed inside and saw Martin dead on the floor and the murderer still at the window.

Tommy shot the murderer. The murderer fell out of the window and landed in the car park. That was the end of the murderer and the mystery.

13 comments:

Anonymous said...

the stoy is quiet long
nabilah

Anonymous said...

the stoy is quiet long
nabilah

SafiahArshad's Antics! said...

I love your story. It is good and with suspense. Your ending it quite abrupt though. I am sure you can make it more interesting.. :-)

Anonymous said...

i liked ur story very much but i agree with ms safiah

-Zeeshan

sYaHiRaH said...

yep!me too!!!!!!!!!i also agree with ms safiah and zeeshan!!!
hey,but anyway,a very intersting story with lots of suspenses...........

Nur Syahirah

Anonymous said...

im sure do liked ur story but i accept with ms safiah and zeeshan

Anonymous said...

sorry i didnt wrote my name im satria

Anonymous said...

some grammar mistakes
Teck Tiam

Anonymous said...

nice story, it is great.

Anonymous said...

I like your story but the ending was a bit sudden.
Elaine

nasmenem said...

very good

no grammar mistakes..

Mystery Guy said...

very good

Mystery Guy = Aiman

ken lim said...

Juzar, is this story real? By the way it is nice story too.