Juzar's Oral

Situational writing ( written by:Juzar.M.Heera)

All Saturday, Hussein and Aisha were so excited they could think and talk of nothing else. Their parents had promised to take them to the funfair! The funfair was at the Botanical Garden. It was a very decent place.

All of a sudden, the inflatable that Hussein and Aisha were playing on went out of air. The children on the inflatable got a shock because they were falling from about thirty meters high with the huge inflatable that they were playing on.

The manager also got a shock to see the children falling with the inflatable. He called for some workers to come and help to pump back the air again and give the children free ice cream because they did not do their duty to look after the inflatable.

The children were very happy that they got a free ice cream and they did not get injured.

The Murder ( written by Juzar.M.Heera)

One day, a famous detective of Singapore, Martin, was solving a murder case. The person murdered was actually his friend Kelvin. Kelvin was only twenty years old.

When Martin arrived at Kelvin's house, he saw that Kelvin lying on the floor with a knife poked into his chest. He turned Kelvin and saw that the knife was sticking out from behind. Martin declared Kelvin dead. Martin also fond out that Kelvin was only facing his head upwards to the wall. Martin looked upwards to the wall to see what was so special.

To his shock, Martin saw a sentence written with blood. The sentence was, “No one is able to save Kelvin now. Ha! Ha! Ha! My worst enemy is now dead.”

Suddenly, Martin saw more words appearing. The words made a paragraph. It was the most scariest and shocking case of his life but he still had to complete it.

After a few hours, he found that the words were appearing with the help of a projector hidden under the sofa. Martin was glad that it was not a ghost.

Now the last step was to find the murderer. Martin became very anxious to find the person who had murdered Kelvin.

As Martin was walking home, he noticed somebody following him. Martin quickly ran to his house and rushed to his room.

While the person was following Martin home, another famous detective of Singapore, Tommy, saw them. He also tried to follow them.

After a few minutes, Tommy saw Martin go into his house and the person following Martin go to the back of Martin’s house. Tommy followed Martin to his room but Martin was still not aware of Tommy.

A few minutes later, Tommy heard a sound of a bullet being shot. Tommy dashed inside and saw Martin dead on the floor and the murderer still at the window.

Tommy shot the murderer. The murderer fell out of the window and landed in the car park. That was the end of the murderer and the mystery.