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PICK UP & PROGRESS! That is what I want all of you to be doing! Pick up what is good and progress on your own creativity as well as reading. This is where pupils can put up their composition pieces for others to read and comment on. This will help them improve their creative writing... :-) Pupils can also upload their recorded Oral Reading as a video file and others can listen and give comments.
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37 comments:
ur starting was expresive.so it was quite good.
Too loud!do not shout when u r reading!
wow!you read with epression but try to pause at the punctuation mark...
reading word by word
you read too fast.
hey abbas,reading too fast!!!jerky too!!!
:D w00t! nice expressive voice at the start!! i like it and i culd hear it clearly! and its half speed!!
it's too loud,and you repeated some words.
WHY ARE YOU SHOUTING AT THE START VERY EXPRESIVE
NABILHA
whhooooo!too fast.very funny.and a jerky delivery.sill person.
zeeshan
i am dead
ABBAS
you read too fast. too loud. you give a jerky delivery. you read like mmotone... you did not pause during punctuation.
u read too fast.i couldn't understand the story.
sometime repeat
why shouting? u don't have too. u did not pronounce clearly
your reading expressionly and you have said the words wrongly.
too fast but u pronounce your words clearly.
Try not to be too excited as you tend to mumble some words! Your reading is expressive though and nice to listen to. Well done!
:-)
sometime repeat
wrong compo but still alot of expression especially the starting.
Too loud!do not shout when u r reading!u are reading word by word.great job!1,2,3 bye bye!:)lol
your STARTING WAS IMPRESSIVE AND GOOD JOB!!!!!!!!!
You are mumbling also.......and you are reading word by word
too loud and did not pay attention.
You are mumbling also.......and you are reading word by word
Abbas!Awsome! you are quite loud and at the starting you use expression. Good job! Keep it up!
i like the way you read just that it is too loud and you read it too fast.but by the way, I can understand what r u saying.well done and good job!!!
Do not shout when u r reading but u read expression.Good work.
too fast.. and r u shouting b'cos it's too loud.. u did not stop at every punctuation marks but it was good cus u read with expression!
at first u read too loud and u make me almost shock to dieth.u have read the wrong compo,u should read the oral practice.
You read too fast and too loud and you did not pause at the punctuation marks!
Shahrul,
I was surprised during the first part.
You read it with expression.
too fast and never stop when there is a fullstop.
good but quite fast.
good but quite fast.
Abbas!
Woah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The beginning is a BANG!
You passed everything and i mean EVERYTHING!
:-P
you it to fast and keep repeating word
your reading is too fast and you did shout
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