Tuesday, August 05, 2008
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PICK UP & PROGRESS! That is what I want all of you to be doing! Pick up what is good and progress on your own creativity as well as reading. This is where pupils can put up their composition pieces for others to read and comment on. This will help them improve their creative writing... :-) Pupils can also upload their recorded Oral Reading as a video file and others can listen and give comments.
34 comments:
W0w im so overenjoyed too hear more of your oral reading i like ur voice :D
to much sudden stops but either than that it was ok.
you could improve a lot more
NABILAH
you could improve a lot more
NABILAH
nice try....butyou can try better by readingwith expression....:)
reading word by word too
reading too slow.reading word by word also.
reading too slow.reading word by word also.
:D 0.0 most sudden stops but its good anyway but at the first part u gave a monotone
can you please try to read a little bit faster?
Aiman
you doesn't read expressionly
You need to pronounce your "th" properly. Other than that, your reading is quite good.. :-)
syazwan:you have too much sudden stops you don't pronouse the s &th propely
YOU WERE A LITTLE BIT JERKY BUT NICE JOB!!!
I can't hear the last word that you were saying but still quite ok,Good Job!
your reading is good but there are to much stops.
you are mumbing and you read too slow and i don`t know why so many people is mumbling!!me alsoXD
Syazwan,
Good pronouncation!
Good speed!
All areas you are OKAY!
you read too slow. i think you did not read with expression... you did not read like mmoton... i almost unable to lisent cleary.
u pronounced the 's' sound noy that clearly.u didn't pause appropriately.
jj and jy-sometimes pause too long
Hello Syazwan! You didn't say with expression and you pronouns the s letter wrongly.
good!you pause at punctuation marks.
to much of sudden stops and u give a jerky delivery.u are reaing word by word.overall,its great!well done!
i am sorry to say that you did not stop for a while when there is punctation and i don't really understand what are you trying to say.
to much pause and a bit of monotone.Keep it up and keep improving.
sudden stops and a little bit of murmuring.and i thought it was monotone.
zeeshan
stops at places and murmuring give a jerky disvery
Abbas
it's very nice but you are stopping too long at full stops.
too much sudden pause.. but ur reading was gud!
Uh.you read word-by-word and I enjoy your story!
Yusuf:your pronounsation is not that good.But your reading is good
Ben:why did u stop half way???but i can hear all the words u said.
syazwan,
I read it too slow and I pronouce it clearly.
you don't speak the wrods clearly.. improve on thst ....
but it has a little expression
good you did pause but you read quite fast.
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