Tuesday, August 05, 2008
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PICK UP & PROGRESS! That is what I want all of you to be doing! Pick up what is good and progress on your own creativity as well as reading. This is where pupils can put up their composition pieces for others to read and comment on. This will help them improve their creative writing... :-) Pupils can also upload their recorded Oral Reading as a video file and others can listen and give comments.
36 comments:
nice reading..lol i like it based on it..i think u did a great job
i dont think so satria.it was only ok
Remember the Rubric that I gave you? Based on that, why did you say it is good and why did you say it is just "ok"?
I feel that you are doing good. You will do even better if you slow down on your reading.
Love, Ms Safiah.. :-)
324bithink you did a great job!continue to read like this in future.thumps up!:)
You read too fast.You did not stop during fullstop.I think that you swallow your word.you are getting softer and softer.
wonderful reading! bravo!
veronica,you are reading word by word in the end.you are loud in the beginning,but you are soft in the middle and loud again in the end.
you can try better by reading with expression....good try
0.0 ok well u did read too fast (lets just say a little bit) and u didnt stop ur reading was with expression too!but u dint gave a jerky delivery
nice reading but i think you read too fast
you did not pause appropriatly and you did not pronounce the words properly.you read too fast and speak softly.
U need to improve to not read too fast.but your reading was ok.
i think u read to fast.in the half way why u read so soft???
i think you did not read with expression.
Um you are speaking too fast.
You are reading too fast
nice reading....but you sometimes reading too fast and sometime you read too soft some times you read too loud
Regards,
Yue Hean..XD
you are talking to fast and you are mumbling but you are very loud but not so clear. your reading is as normal
NAbliah
Hi!
Veronica, based on my judgement,
you did a good job for most. Only you read too fast.
You read loud clear but sometimes you read a bit fast and you read with expression.
slower down
Hey Veronica
I think you didn't use that much expression. Try to use more.
Hey Veronica
I think you didn't use that much expression. Try to use more.
nice reading..you read clearly with expressions :)
you read too fast but the reading is okay
You did not pause appropriately at punctuation marks and you did not read word-by-word but,good try!
u did not pronounce the words clearly.ok!but u did read expresively.
Try to read slower so u can pronounce clearly.
Try to read slower so u can pronounce clearly.
ur reading is good in expresssion
but must be lower voice
I think I sometimes read fast and slow.
You were reading too fast and try reading it with expression
Syaz1
good reading veronica but too fast.
Mystery Guy=Aiman
i think u didn't pause a lot of times.
I think you did not pause for a while when there are puntuation marks but did not read the story word-byword just that you read a little fast.you read with expression which i like.
Jia jia-too fast
Jing yi-sometime fast
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