Tuesday, August 05, 2008
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PICK UP & PROGRESS! That is what I want all of you to be doing! Pick up what is good and progress on your own creativity as well as reading. This is where pupils can put up their composition pieces for others to read and comment on. This will help them improve their creative writing... :-) Pupils can also upload their recorded Oral Reading as a video file and others can listen and give comments.
30 comments:
to many sudden stops.
read word by word and stop
no punctuations.
good try but try to read it expressively..
too much sudden stops u know..
not clear got more time to improve
yoyoyo!!!!how u doin man!huh? huh?anyway,too fast lah,swallowing ur word too
Well done! Try not to get too excited and relax when reading.. :-)
there are some sudden stop the rest are good
you stop when you are reading.you are swallowing some words.
good but too many sudden stops.
Hey Nasrullah,try to read with more expression please.
u read it with no expression .
TOO MUCH SUDDEN STOPS BuT GOOD
pause to much and it is not appropriately
It is GOOOOOD N I like ur oral reading!!
You read a bit too fast but you read word-by-word!
too fast but ok
the pause is to long u need to improve on this so work hard.
Veronica said: You read too fast but your reading is good.
JJ said:too fast but good.
why did u stop at etc "bla" then "bla" for such a long time.
your stop was too long
i agrree with zeeshan . but clear thoudh good job.
u r readin' without expression and u r readin'word-by-word.
Nasguga,
Huh?
Your reading is slow and your AFI is there!
a little mistakes.
ur reading was good but u did'nt stop at punctuation marks..
one sudden stop. but either than that WHOOOO!
zeeshan
no sudden stop but I will give you a C
Aiman
one sudden stop
Abbas
one sudden stop. but either than that WHOOOO!
zeeshan
no sudden stop but I will give you a C
Aiman
one sudden stop
Abbas
ur reading was good but u did'nt stop at punctuation marks..
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