Tuesday, August 05, 2008
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PICK UP & PROGRESS! That is what I want all of you to be doing! Pick up what is good and progress on your own creativity as well as reading. This is where pupils can put up their composition pieces for others to read and comment on. This will help them improve their creative writing... :-) Pupils can also upload their recorded Oral Reading as a video file and others can listen and give comments.
34 comments:
they could....not think.
to long a stop.
yoyo,too fast lahhhh!!!!!!!!
yeah zshan ur rite,and it was a jerky delivery wtf..
no effort
why pause suddenly?
you have pause too long
TOO SOFT,LITTLE JERKY
you read too soft but very clear.you read with expression.
too soft too fast and too gibbrish pratice on that
you are reading too soft.
you stpped halfwau
You need to read louder and try to open up your mouth when reading.. Your pronounciation is good though.. :-)
No emotion Bad one Huh?
:-(
too low and no emotions.
u speak too soft and too fast and i can't understand some words that u r sayin'.GOOD JOB!
your rEADING IS too soft.
i thing u need read a little bit louder.
u read it too slow.i think u read it with no expression
Nabilah!
Please improve to at least use some expression because you are mumbling.
jj-too soft read louder!
Veronica said:oo slow and soft but good reading.
you stop at the full stops but you stop for too long.
To the next paragraph the pause is to long.so improve on that.
stop and u r mumblllllllllllllling
You voice is too low and you cannot pause too long!
i agrree with zeeshan but clear.. nice and u read with expression
good but u read fast, then u slow down.
Nabilah,
I cannot hear your READING! Improve on that area.
You're swallowing your words and you gave a lot of jerky delivery.
there was a long stop on what i said the last time.a bit jerky to.
Zeeshan
A very long stop you got there.
Abbas
Try not to stop a long time.
Aiman
to make it nicer u have to read a lil bit faster b'cos u read too slow and too much sudden pause.. but nice reading.. :D
try to read louder....
try to read louder....
you read it with no expression and you did not pronounce your word clearly
i think i gave the wrong one.. it's opposite it's suppose to be "u read a lil slower" srry -.-
lol
why did u pause???
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