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PICK UP & PROGRESS! That is what I want all of you to be doing! Pick up what is good and progress on your own creativity as well as reading. This is where pupils can put up their composition pieces for others to read and comment on. This will help them improve their creative writing... :-) Pupils can also upload their recorded Oral Reading as a video file and others can listen and give comments.
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June
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- Two Best Friend (by Ong Jing Yi)
- 2nd Group of Oral Practice
- An Accident In The Park-Nasrullah
- Oral Practice by 4 Honesty
- The Ghost That Haunted the Village (by Zeeshan)
- A Genuine Mistake (By Nur Nabilah)
- A Greatful Boy (by ken lim)
- Tommy's First Gift (Writen by Aiman)
- The Murder ( written by Juzar.M.Heera)
- Haunting George (By Nur Diyanah)
- The archer and the warrior who killed the darkness...
- A Nightmare (by Chen Yang)
- THE BOILED PRAWNS AND THE QUEEN OF DARKNESS (By Nu...
- The Grave House (By Lee Kia Wee)
- The Boy That is Always Late For School (yuehean)
- One special ring (By Ken Lim)
- The noisy family (Nur Irsyad 4 Honesty)
- Football Mark (By Wenyao)
- The Coachman Who Could Paint Very Well (By Mah Yon...
- How Singapore Got Modernised (by Syafiq)
- The Race By Hanif
- An unknown mystery(Satria)
- Father Time And His Pattern Behaviour Book (by Sha...
- The Hilarious Rat (by Nur Syahirah)
- Facebook Account after deleting Multiply account
- Friendship Never End - By Megawati (4 Honesty)
- School is Great!
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119 comments:
clear enough for and B :D
marthav nice emotion A
li jun voice was quite niceXD
lijun-clear enough!nice
Sounds good! But some times,I cannot understandwhat they are saying!
A for marthav!!!
Hmm syazwan you are too fast by the way the first comment was for lin jun
if i will give marthav some ranks.... i will give him rank A
syazwan voice was too loudXD
Li Jun-
Your voice is not clear,and why did you laugh halfway?????????????????
Marthav-
your voice was very clear.keep up the good work!
Yi Yang
nasrullah nice work but nid a little louder:D don't pause too
li jun-a few mistakes.
marthav-good.
syazwan-to loud but good.
nasrullah-not clear but its ok.
LI jun it is a little good
Marthav-GOOD WORK!!!
syazwan-ER VERY GOOD!!!
Nasrullah-HAD A SOFT VOICE BUT GOOD THOUGH
li jun-she was mumbeling
marthav -he was ok there was thenical problem in the end
syazwan -he sound very good
nesrullah-thenical problem and togibbrish
nasrillah-he read too fast so i can`t hear propperly and the word hahaha was very devil
Li jun-Do not always stop
Mathav-Good but do not forget to stop.
syazwan-good but not too loud
Nurullah-not too fast and a little bit blur
Li jun-yours is okay but can improve.good job
martav-yours is good
syazwan-you can improve
Nasrullah-yours is soft but can improve
LiJun-When you read do not laugh.
Marthav-Your reading was good.
Syazwan-You keep slowing down.
Nasrullah-When you speak your voice was a bit soft.
Li Jun-not very clear
Marthav-not bad
Syazwan-okay
Nasrullah-too soft
Elaine
syazwan-good job....
nasrullah-too soft...i think u read this without any feeling is it?it is funny when you said hahahah!!!
li jun-very good
marthav-good
syazwan-good
nasrullah-soft but good
LI JUN-very good
marthav- lock the door part and and forgot to stop
syazwan-can in prove on not stoping
Nasrullah- too fast and too quite.
li jun-alittle bit slow
marthav-very loud and clear good!:)
syazwan-a little bit too loud and a little bit not clear.
narullah-not that clear
Li Jun-her intonation was very good
Marthav-has the same intonation as Li Jun
Syazwan-he is mumbling and I can't understand some words that he is saying
Nasrullah-he is mumbling but his voice is very clear
Li Jun-Some mistakes
Marthav-good
Syazwan-good
Nasrullah-Need expresions and too soft
li jun-was good
marthav- ok
syazwan-his voice wae quite good
nasrullah-he was mumbeling
Li jun-you should not stop for so long
martav- no mistake very good
syazwan-quite good i didn't hear any mistake
nasrullah-blur and too fast
Li Jun-your reading was not that good.
Marthav-not bad.
syazwan-your reading was okay
nasrullah-not that clear and too fast.
Li Jun- please, when you talk, do not laugh.
marthav- very good, i like it.
syazwan- not too fast next time.
nasrullah- too soft. it will be good if you speak louder.
Li Jun-There was some thecnical problem.
Marthav-Your voice was loud and clear.
Nasrullah-Your voice is very soft and fast.
li jun - her voice is clear.
Marthav - the ending was kind of funny.
Shazuwan- It sound kind of a mumble
Nassrullah- the suond has no expression it sounded kind of boring
Li Jun- Wow! Good but please stop pausing.
Marthav- Wow!Good,Loud and Clear!
Syazwan- Huh? Why are you pausing?
Nasrullah- Wokey,but it is not really loud and clear.
nasrullah-Your voice is to soft!Louder please!!!!!!Oh, 1 more thing,You are very cruel!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
li jun- got laughing sound and stop
marthav- very good
syazwan-mistakes......
nasrullah-soft sound but good
Li Jun-she laugh a bit and thats not good....but overall gd!thumps up
Marthav-Very intresting!he mumble
Syazwan-Its fine...^.^ hahahaha LOLZ
Nasrullah-very restless and soft
Li Jun-not very clear
Marthav-it is very clear
Syazwan-too fast but clear
Nasrullah-too soft but good
lijun - very good
mathav-good job
syazwan-A little bit too loud
Nasrullah-no high and low pitch too soft
Marthav-good
Syazwan-not bad
Nasrullah-too soft
Li Jun- you are laughing in the starting and a few stops.
Marthav- nice recording.
Syazwan- a few expressions. good.
nasrullah- mistakes!!! mistakes!!!
Li Jun- Goood one.
Marthav- your's is good.
Syazwan- Syazwam very good ah.
Nasrullah- your voise must be a little bit louder.
lijun - very good
mathav-good job
syazwan-A little bit too loud
Nasrullah-no high and low pitch too soft
Li jun- Awesome!
Syazwan-not even a mistake. Good work.
Nasrullah-Good but a little bit more exprensions
lijun - very good
mathav-good job
syazwan-A little bit too loud
Nasrullah-no high and low pitch too soft
Li Jun- Goood one.
Marthav- your's is good.
Syazwan- Syazwam very good ah.
Nasrullah- your voise must be a little bit louder.
I cannot understand what Nasrullah
is saying!
Diyanah-You are speaking too loud.
Syahirah-You should speak louder.
Diyanah-Very Good
Syahirah-Okay
diyanah- it is very fast
syahirah-alittle bit fast
Diyanah-it is too fast but slow
Syahirah-too fast but clear
diyanah-too good
syahirah-very good
diyanah - clear enough lol?
syahirah - nice expresion :D
diyanah- too fast at first
syahirah- excellent
I think I read to fast.
syahirah-not bad
Diyanah-too fast and a bit blur
Syahirah-a bit fast
Diyana's is very clear
diyanah- okey but do not stop.
syahirah- not too slow, not too fast.
Diyanah-wow that is good
syahirah-that is also good
Diyanah-Good
Syahirah-Not bad
Diyanah- to fast.
syahirah- you got expressions
Diyanah-too fast
syahirah-very good but a little too fast
diyanah-a little bit too fast
syahirah-not that clear
DIYANAH-OMG U READ NO MISTAKES GOOD WORK BUT U ARE TO FAST!!!
SYAHIRAH-VERY GOOD KP UP WHT YOUR GOOD WORK!!!
Diyanah-Wowowow! Nice man!
syahirah- Hahahaha! what a funny story and you are good!
Diyanah-very good
Syahirah-okay
Diyanah-if was ot fast and and could a buzz
Syahirah - the sound has a lot o few xpression
Diyanah-can't hear her and very profund english...BRAVO
Syahirah-very gd!thumps up!^.^
diyanah-she sounds very good
syahriah-she sounds good
Diyanah-i liked her intonation as I can understand what is she talking about.
Syahirah-I hate my recording!I really hate it!!!!
Diyanah-Wooooooow!Nice work.
Syahira-a bit more louder please.
Diyanah- your's is very good.
syahirah- your tone is good.
diyanah-i thought it was blur.
syahirah-very good
syhirah is wondervful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
diyanah is good but can`t hear propperly
Diyanah-Wonderful
Shayriah-good
diyanah-not so good-but ok
syahriah-quite good
Diyanah- good and nice a
syakirah- too fast and quite b+
syahirah!your voice
is wonderful
syahirah!your voice
is wonderful
it was too fast syafiq.....pls inform that and you read too fast
syafiq's voice is very clear,but I cannot understand a word!
syafiq
mmmmmmmm.....your rank is A star!
teck tiam-
your voice is toooooo loud
veronica-
your speech is too slow
Veronica's is very clear!
wenyao's voice is too loud
yusuf's recording is very clear!
syafiq-wow its good
teck tiam-good
veronica-its too soft
wen yao-so loud but okay
Yusuf-a bit loud but good
zeeshan-soft but okay
syafiq - too soft. you sound like youre serious
Teck Tiam - lol nice emotion too but u pause
Veronica - too soft and slow but good
Wen Yao - Too loud..u pause and not
much expression
Yusuf - nice voice but u pause...
A++++++++
Zeeshan - too soft,fast but still..A
Syafiq-You are speaking very fast
Teck Tiam-You were good
Veronica-You are speaking very softly
Wen Yao-You are mumbling
Yusuf-You were great
Zeeshan-It is a little soft
Shafiq-soft and can improve.
Teck Tiam-Good Job!^.^
Veronica-Soft and very restless...
Wen Yao-You talk very funny....haha
Yusuf-SIMPLY BRAVO!
Zeeshan-very restless..and soft hehehe^.^
syafiq-too loud and fast but good
Teck tiam-good but you sometimes suddenly stop
Veronica-too soft and slow but good
Wen Yao-a little bit fast and loud
Yusuf-quite good but a little fast
Zeeshan-too soft but good
your voice was too loud(teck tiam)
When the last paragrph you slow down!??????
For veronica is very slow and voice is too low
it was too loud but its ok(wen yao)
He was mumbling
There technical problem so i can`t hear propperly(yusuf)
It is too soft and is too fast(zeeshan0
syafiq- good, about history but soft
teck tiam- got stop
veronica-soft and slow
wen yao-much good
yusuf-wonderful
zeeshan-good
syafiq-soft but good
teck tiam-good
veronica-soft very soft
wenyao-cannot say
yusuf-very good
zeeshan-soft but good
Syafiq-Okay
Teck Tiam-loud and clear
Veronica-Too soft
Wen Yao- too loud
Yusuf-okay
Zeeshan-soft but clear
Syafiq-too fast but clear
Teck Tiam-it is clear
Veronica-too soft i can't hear wat u are saying
Wen Yao-too fast
Yusuf-good
Zeeshan-too soft
Syafiq-excellent
teck tiam-good job
Veronica-too slow and too soft.
Wen Yao-Loud but a little unclear
Yusuf-good
Zeeshan-Too soft.
wen yao
your voici is very loud!!!you are talking lazily!
yusuf-
your voice is not very clear.your speech is quite fast
zeeshan-
your voice is to fast
Syafiq-Sorry!Technical Error-
Teck Tiam-Wow!It is Bang!
Veronica-Not so clear but okay
Wen Yao-Oh no!It is so loud!
Yusuf-What a good tone!:)
Zeeshan-Are you mumbling?
syafiq-very fast
tecktiam-not so clear
veronica-too soft
wen yao-not so clear
yusuf-perfect!!!
zeeshan-ithink you read without feelings and very soft
syafiq - thenical problem but sound good
teck tiam-his like mumbling
veronica-thenical problem but good
wen yao-loud but not clear
yusuf-like have running nose and not clear
zeeshan-too soft but clear
syafiq-good
teck tiam-not so good
veronica-not so clear
wen yao-very loud
yusuf-too loud
zeeshan-too soft
syafiq-a little fast but nice
teck tiam-very good
veronica-too soft
wen yao-nice but too fast and pronouce properly
yusuf-a missing word
zeeshan-too soft and too fast
Shafiq-is like a stirck tearcherr shsouting
Teck Tiam-has a mumbling voice
Veron-every second she kind of stop
Wenyau has a mummbling and like he has running nose
Yusof- is it clear
Zeeshan-it's not clear and it's soft
Syafiq- I think your's is the best.
Teck Tiam- your's is to fast.
Veronica- please read a little bit louder.
Wen Yao- your voice is to loud.
Yusuf- wow, your's is very good.
Zeeshan- your voice must be louder.
Syafiq-very well
Teck tiam-okay
Veronica-too soft
Wen yao-not so clear
Yusuf-okay
Zeeshan-too soft
syafiq-very loud :)!but a little bit not clear...
teck tiam-quite clear!
veronica-too slow and soft...:<
wen yao-quite loud:>but not clear:<
yusuf-clear!!!
zeeshan-too soft??
Syafiq - very good A
TECK TIAM-not very clear and too fast B
veronica-very soft and too slow slow and steady B+
Wen Yao- Too loud and too fast B-
Yusuf-Good slow and steady A-
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Zeeshan-too soft to quite B+
Abbas
Syafiq-Good speech.
Teck Tiam-Wow it was fantastic.
Veronica-Not so loud and clear but its okay
Wen Yao-Oh my god you are so loud.
Yusuf-Okay fine.
Zeeshan-What a tone! So low
syafiq-blur but good.
teck tiam-very good
veronica-to slow.And when u said burglars it seemed like banglas.
wen yao-very blur but ok i also agree with ms safiah.
yusuf-ok but could be improved.
zeeshan-to soft.
Syafiq-he talks too fast that I can't even understand what is he talking about
Teck Tiam-very clear and to me he mumbled just a little
Veronica-can't even hear what is she saying and I can't even understandand a single a word
Wen Yao-very clear but he mumbled quite a number of times
Yusuf-extremely good
Zeeshan-has a mumbling voice
syafiq- It is The History of Singapore.
Teck tiam- too fast.
veronica- too slow and no expressions.
Wen yao- a few mistakes.
Yusof- very intresting.
Zeeshan- a bit soft.
SYAFIQ-WOW NICW VOICE I LOVE IT>>X<<
TECK TIAM-WOW NICE VOICE TECK TIAM
VERONICA-I LOVE YOUR VOICE MORE!!!!!! LOLZ SOFT I DONT CARE>>XD<<
WEN YAO-BAD VOICE MORE LOUDER!!!!
YUSOF-NICE VOICE MEDIUM NICE>>XD<<
ZEESHAN-NICE READING>>XD<<
syafiq-not that clear.
teck tiam-not that bad.
veronica-not that loud and clear.
wen yao-too fast and no experiance when reading.
yusuf-loud and clear
zeeshan-not clear at all
syafiq- it is very good.
teck tiam- do not stop during your speaking.
veronica- too soft. louder!!!
wen yao- DO NOT STOP when you are speaking.
yusuf- okey . I like it.
zeeshan- too soft.
Zeeshan's recording is not very clear!
Syafiq-Too fast but clear.
Teck Tiam-Too loud but clear.
Veronica-Very Soft.
Wen Yao-Too loud but okay.
Yusuf-Too loud.
Zeeshan-Soft.
syafiq,It's wonderful.
Teck Tiam,it's Just to fast.
veronica,it's to slow
Zeeshan,you is just soft.
Ms Safiah - Thanks everyone!... You have done a wonderful job commenting on your friends. Hope you will learn from your friends and improve your own reading. :-)
I think Syafiq spit in the microphone
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