An Accident In The Park
Nashruddin, Mohd Aman and Aini were playing in the park one fine afternoon. It was very hot and they were all perspiring profusely but they continued playing in the park. Aini decided to rest under the shade of a tree for a while.
After that Aini was out of sight. The boys did not notice this and they began to play basketball. She came back later with her friend, Kartini. She was actually taking the keys to her friend's bicycle. Then she sat on her friend's bicycle. They were cycling around happily when they heard a horrible scream.
A boy had knocked his head on a wall while he was cycling and was badly injured. His head was bleeding. Mohd Aman and Nashruddin were very near the scene of the accident and immediately went to help him. They could see the flesh of his head where his skull had cracked. Blood was oozing out from the back of his head. He was yelling for his mother and father who should have been nearby. It seemed that he was speeding and not wearing a helmet.
A lot of people tried to help him. His parents finally came and called the ambulance. Nashruddin, Mohd Aman, Aini and Kartini were discussing what had happened when the paramedics arrived and sent the injured boy to the hospital. Everyone was shocked that such an ugly accident had happened.
Nashruddin and his friends had learnt an important lesson. They made sure they put on their safety helmets whenever they went cycling or rollerblading.
18 comments:
is the boy's ead serious?
Teck Tiam
is the boy's head serious?
Teck Tiam
it was a great story but there is something missing at the end.
Elaine
are they hurt? so sad..good story anyway..
good
Your story was okay but what about the boy's head?
diyanah
Your story was okay but what about the boy's head?
diyanah
what happen to the boy head?
very good story.it teaches us something
how is the boy? is he dead?
Okay why do you have to post this story? And how you change the original names to the 'fake' names... People, if you don't know, this is a true story.
Did the boy died?
very good
yes to teck tiam
Your story is very interesting and I could see the flow and development.. :-) Well done!
the story is nice but wat happen to the boy's head?
The story the boy's head and what happen next
Shahrulabbas
interesting story
well done (your story is not really complete right?)
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