Thursday, June 26, 2008

An Accident In The Park-Nasrullah

An Accident In The Park

Nashruddin, Mohd Aman and Aini were playing in the park one fine afternoon. It was very hot and they were all perspiring profusely but they continued playing in the park. Aini decided to rest under the shade of a tree for a while.

After that Aini was out of sight. The boys did not notice this and they began to play basketball. She came back later with her friend, Kartini. She was actually taking the keys to her friend's bicycle. Then she sat on her friend's bicycle. They were cycling around happily when they heard a horrible scream.

A boy had knocked his head on a wall while he was cycling and was badly injured. His head was bleeding. Mohd Aman and Nashruddin were very near the scene of the accident and immediately went to help him. They could see the flesh of his head where his skull had cracked. Blood was oozing out from the back of his head. He was yelling for his mother and father who should have been nearby. It seemed that he was speeding and not wearing a helmet.

A lot of people tried to help him. His parents finally came and called the ambulance. Nashruddin, Mohd Aman, Aini and Kartini were discussing what had happened when the paramedics arrived and sent the injured boy to the hospital. Everyone was shocked that such an ugly accident had happened.

Nashruddin and his friends had learnt an important lesson. They made sure they put on their safety helmets whenever they went cycling or rollerblading.

18 comments:

Anonymous said...

is the boy's ead serious?
Teck Tiam

Anonymous said...

is the boy's head serious?
Teck Tiam

Anonymous said...

it was a great story but there is something missing at the end.
Elaine

Anonymous said...

are they hurt? so sad..good story anyway..

Anonymous said...

good

Anonymous said...

Your story was okay but what about the boy's head?

diyanah

Anonymous said...

Your story was okay but what about the boy's head?

diyanah

irsyad said...

what happen to the boy head?

Anonymous said...

very good story.it teaches us something

Anonymous said...

how is the boy? is he dead?

Anonymous said...

Okay why do you have to post this story? And how you change the original names to the 'fake' names... People, if you don't know, this is a true story.

Anonymous said...

Did the boy died?

nasmenem said...

very good

yes to teck tiam

SafiahArshad's Antics! said...

Your story is very interesting and I could see the flow and development.. :-) Well done!

Anonymous said...

the story is nice but wat happen to the boy's head?

Anonymous said...

The story the boy's head and what happen next





Shahrulabbas

sYaHiRaH said...

interesting story

Anonymous said...

well done (your story is not really complete right?)