Tuesday, June 24, 2008

The archer and the warrior who killed the darkness giant(by satria)

Once there was a hero called Freddy he loved to fight at the age of 15 but he didn't fight with his classmates or the students/teachers he punched here and there he punched the door the book but not his friends and the student and every when he just punched once...his friends will ask him who are you punching?''He especially loved to play water guns he will shoot here and there he even shoot walls and made them wet! He wanted to be a great hero soon. He always said I will need to wait patiently.

At the age of 23 he really forgotten about his friends and his favourite hobbies especially training his fighting so he would become a warrior then he quickly went for training with his classmates (new) and he was training his basketball it was his first time playing basketball and his friends would cheer for him as it was his first time and he also loved playing sports such as soccer.

Then his memory about his fighting came back slowly and soon he would just train his skills when he was bored then the Light warriors came to make Freddy a Light archer he accepted but he wanted to be a warrior and he asked The light master and the Light master said you could be the warrior I have seen your skills of fighting he said to Freddy but where can I get the Archer? Freddy replied I know who can be the light Archer, my friend!

Then the light master accepted his friend and they went for the revenge of the darkness giant who would bring darkness to the world. They accepted the fight and went with the remaining light warriors they went to the world of darkness and the fight begun.....Freddy and his friend went to kill the giant while the remaining light warriors fight the dark soldiers in the end the giant was dead and only Freddy, his friend and 3 light soldiers remained.

12 comments:

Anonymous said...

very good story.

-Zeeshan

Anonymous said...

nice story, keep it up

Anonymous said...

it is great

Yong Xuan

Anonymous said...

How many light warriors are there?
If there were 1000000 it was sad there are 3 left :-(

Good story! .... Hanif

Anonymous said...

It was a great story but u did not say how many warriors are there.
Elaine

irsyad said...

you have done it this time satria!a great story!i hope you will continue to write this kind of story!thumps up!

ken lim said...

a little bit scarry but i like it.

Anonymous said...

geat but sentence too long

Anonymous said...

I like ur story.Good job!

Mystery Guy said...

Your story interesting Satria.

Mystery Guy=Aiman

Anonymous said...

TY FOR All the replies

satria

Anonymous said...

nice work.keepit up!!!