Monday, June 23, 2008

THE BOILED PRAWNS AND THE QUEEN OF DARKNESS (By Nur Diyanah)

There was once a very old man. He was fortunate that he had a very good business and a young and The old man and he walked away beautiful wife. His business went well and his wife loved him very much. My granduncle was curious how an old man could be so fortunate. He wondered all day long.

The next day, my granduncle, Pak Zainal, asked the old man the secret to be fortunate. Come on. I want to be fortunate too, begged Pak Zainal. His two friends, Pak Mat and Pak Din, repeated what he said. It's nothing, replied the old man and he walked away.

The next day, Pak Zainal and his two friends asked the old man the same thing again and again but he ignored. The same thing happened the next day. Pak Zainal and his two friends kept repeating the same question again and again. The old man was fed-up with their annoying behavior. He finally told them the secret. Tonight go to the graveyard with a pail of boiled prawns at midnight and wait," said the old man. That was all he said.

That midnight, the three men went to the graveyard carrying a pail of boiled prawns. They shouted out. " Boiled prawns, boiled prawns!"shouted the three men in the middle of the graveyard. All of a sudden, the graves started to crack open. Hands started coming out of the graves. The three men turned white when they saw corpes coming out of the graves They quickly ran out the graveyard.

The real secret is to stay in the graveyard when the corpes are coming out. Then, the Queen of Darkness will come. You should trade the boiled prawns with your wishes. The queen will definitely take your prawns and grant your wishes. That explained why the old man lead a rich life with a young and beautiful wife. This is supposed to be a true story.

11 comments:

Anonymous said...

Nice story ill give it an a+ but i dont know about spelling and all of that u might check it so ill still give an a+ try to make it better and intresting(this is more intresting than mega's story)

BY SATRIA

irsyad said...

hi another MARVALLOUS story by you keep up the gd work!!

sYaHiRaH said...

I am quite confused with the starting part but starting from the forth paragraph it is more clearer for me to understand.

Nur Syahirah

SafiahArshad's Antics! said...

Yes I agree that the beginning is quite confusing and a bit long as the introduction part. You should elaborate more on the main story on how to get the wishes.. ;-)

Anonymous said...

IT WAS TURE THAT IT BETTER THAN MEGA




JING YI

Anonymous said...

IT good


by:elaine

Anonymous said...

nice story.

-Zeeshan

Anonymous said...

it is much more better than Mega's story and great job.

Yong Xuan

ken lim said...

i agree with satria.

Anonymous said...

i accidentally type in wrongly.it was jumbled up.

Anonymous said...

The story is good!