Monday, June 16, 2008

Friendship Never End - By Megawati (4 Honesty)

Sadness and angriness had written all over Jamie's face.She just received a phone call from Edna's mother, Mdm Shireen.She announced sadly to Jamie that Edna had died in a car accident. Seconds after Mdm Shireen told Jamie, tears began to roll on Jamie's red cheek.Edna and Jamie were inseparable to each other. They called themselves 'Sisterhood' which meant for them that they were like sisters. No one could ever stop their friendship not even their parents.


At around
3 o'clock
in the morning,Jamie had a dream. She dreamt that Edna told her to go to her house and enter her room. In the dream, Jamie asked, 'What should I do at your room?'. Edna kept quiet for awhile and answered, 'I want you to open my wardrobe and take a red velvet box. Just take it and don't ask me anymore questions.'. In a second, Edna disappeared into thin air.


Jamie treated the dream as her imagination.She ignored the dream for three days but every night she would experience the same dream. At
11 o'clock
at night,when it was time for bedtime for Jamie. She brushed her teeth before going for bed, she saw a figure of a girl with major injuries on her limbs. It looked like Edna! Jamie couldn't breathe as she was shocked. She felt like she wanted to faint but she couldn't. Jamie quickly rinsed her teeth and ran to her bed and covered her head with her blue blanket. She kept saying a lot of prayers.

After ten minutes, Jamie peeked out of the blanket. It was okay then. When Jamie were sleeping, she was awakened by a cold touch on her hand. When she saw the figure of Edna, she covered her head and whispered, 'Please Edna, please don't harm me. I will do anything for you.'.Edna whispered to Jamie with the softest voice that Jamie heard, 'The dream that you dreamt was true. Just follow what I said.

The next day, Jamie went to her house. She said some greetings to Mdm Shireen before entering Edna's room.Jamie told everything about what Edna said.When she was allowed to go in, Jamie opened the door of the wardrobe slowly. When she saw the red velvet box, she opened it. There was a note and some jewelleries. She read the note. 'Thanks for being my best friend. Our friendship will never end even I am not in this world. Do take my jewelleries, my precious friend.' Jamie cried. She was so lucky to have a friend like Edna. She would never forget her forever.


The End

40 comments:

SafiahArshad's Antics! said...

Ok pupils,

Don't forget to put your comments for Mega's story.. :-) Hope to be hearing from you soon and do not forget to upload your own story soon for others to comment!

Ms Safiah Arshad

Anonymous said...

The story is wonderful

nabilah

Pintar Pintas said...

Hello There!

I am Syafiq and I am so pleased with your story.Great Work!

Anonymous said...

The story was impressive.GOOD JOB!

DIYANAH

Anonymous said...

This is a very good composition but there are many ands in one of the sentence.






Teck Tiam

Anonymous said...

A few speeling mistakes but a very nice story.
caleen

Anonymous said...

It is very sad and lots of mistake. Jia Jia.

Anonymous said...

Nice enough to give an A although it gives me the creeps... :D

Hanif....

Anonymous said...

a lot of grammar mistake.but good .





-nas

Anonymous said...

I like it but there is some spelling and grammer mistake.It is very sad too.Ilike it very much.

Veronica

ken lim said...

i like your story but there are some spelling mistakes and some grammer mistakes. please be careful next time when you do another story you like.



ken lim.

Vlud Rus said...

The story is good And it makes me sad! Chen yang

Anonymous said...

The story is interesting and quite sad.

Nur Syahirah

Anonymous said...

It is a sad and scary story.



comment by Juzar.M.Heera

Anonymous said...

a few spelling mistakes but a nice story
caleen

Anonymous said...

The story that you make Mega is very sad but it's very goooooood.

-Aiman-

Anonymous said...

It is very very very sad
wenyao

Anonymous said...

Hi Mega


This is Marthav. Your story was wonderful. Great work!

Anonymous said...

It was a very sad story about their friendship
shahrulabbas

Anonymous said...

Minjun:Your composition is great. But there are some grammar and spelling mistakes.Be more careful and check next time.

Anonymous said...

wow its good though but im getting the creeps about this story nice one too....i say not a very bad story half bad half nice say that more that half nice and 1/4 bad and 3/4 nice........

From, satria

Anonymous said...

It is a sad story but it's great!

Elaine

Anonymous said...

its very sad that edna died from a car acciddent and some more edna and jamie are best friends.i love this story very much but it is a sad story.

Goh Yue Hean here.

Anonymous said...

The story is wonderful keep up !Lijun

Anonymous said...

It's a very sad and touching story.Good job!


Nasheyl

Anonymous said...

The story is wonderful keep up !Lijun

Anonymous said...

it was sad but i love it.from kia wee

Anonymous said...

it is great
jing yi

irsyad said...

youre story is quite something..you yos quite good work keep it up!
irsyad

Anonymous said...

it was sad but i love it.from kia wee

Anonymous said...

It's very disappointing and sad for Edna to die in car accident.Even I felt like crying................HA HA HA HA!!!!!!!!!!!!!I'm just joking with you!!!!!Anyway I find your story very intresting.Keep up the good work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

From:Goh Yi Yang

Anonymous said...

that was a good and sad story







Muhd Yusuf

Anonymous said...

Your story was very good,but there were still some mistakes.

Zeeshan

Anonymous said...

This story is amazing but your grammar is very poor.

Muhd Syazwan

Anonymous said...

Nice story, great job.


yong xuan

Anonymous said...

Thanks class for all your nice comments! -mega=maggi mee

Anonymous said...

nice story, great job

Yong Xuan

Anonymous said...

The story is great.....






Henry
23June2008

Anonymous said...

do you think my story is creepy or sad? pls choose one only!
maggie mee

Anonymous said...

nice story ! :D great job mega!