Wednesday, June 25, 2008

The Ghost That Haunted the Village (by Zeeshan)

One dark and stormy night, Ali and his family were telling stories of ghosts. It was very scary. They were all horrified. Ali lived in a hut in a village. After they went to bed, Ali was awakened by a strange cry. He saw a shadow outside the hut and decided to go out side to check. Beside another hut, he saw a young woman weeping. He went over to her and touched her, but Ali's hand went inside her body. Ali ran back to the hut, and could not sleep for the whole night.

The next day he told the village about what happened. All of them did not believe him. Ali was very scared but tried not to be. Ali then went to play with his friends, but while he was playing, he saw a shadow just standing there and watching. Ali went back to his hut and tried to go to sleep. But he was again awakened by the noise, so he went outside and this time tried asking questions. She did not reply. But she said her name was Aliah.

Ali went back to the hut. Even though Ali's family was rich they still lived in a hut. Ali's father got him a computer, so he decided to do some research on the village. And he found out that before there was a village there was a war in this place so he showed it to the whole village. Everybody started to believe him now. At night some people stayed awake to check and see if she would return, and she did. They got the leader of the village to talk to her. She replied and suddenly said that she was his great-grandmother and that his great-grandfather passed away in the war. He died at the exact same spot which was right under the hut in front of her. The leaders name was syafiq and he was very shocked to hear it.

He was also very happy to see his great-grandmother, even in spirit form. Tears came out from his eyes. He was filled with joy. The ghost would now appear every night and Syafiq would come out to talk to her at night. They were very happy when they talked to each other. Ali slept peacefully since then. Syafiq, Ali and the village were very happy since then.

21 comments:

Anonymous said...

This story is great.

Yong Xuan

Anonymous said...

wow unbelieveable i didnt even think i culd make this story


satria

SafiahArshad's Antics! said...

I feel the same way. It is a great story.. I love reading it.. :-)

Anonymous said...

Wow! It Was Unbelievable!!it was so great!!!!

Anonymous said...

Wow! It Was Unbelievable!!it was so great!!!!




yuehean

Anonymous said...

keep on the good work









lee kia wee

Anonymous said...

Scary story Zeeshan and the ghost was a girl in the story you said that the great-grandfather died at the spot where ali and friend put their hut at i think you can go and change the Great-grandmother to the great-grand-father and by the way nice story you got there


Your secret friend from 4 Honesty

Anonymous said...

Indeed scary and unbelievable

Anonymous said...

indeed scary and unbelievable
Teck Tiam

Anonymous said...

It was a wonderful story! Keep it up!

Elaine

irsyad said...

scaryy storry!!!!!but i lurve your story because its interesting and it gives me the suspensed....^.^

irsyad said...

scaryy storry!!!!!but i lurve your story because its interesting and it gives me the suspensed....^.^

Anonymous said...

The story is great it is very nice.

Anonymous said...

The story was wonderful and unbelieveable.KEEP IT UP! Lim li jun

Anonymous said...

thanks for the wonderful comments.

Anonymous said...

It is scary but it is intersting.

nasmenem said...

the leader i syafiq very funny...

very good:>

sYaHiRaH said...

The story is extremely scary but it is very plesant to read your story,Zeeshan.keep it up!!!

Anonymous said...

nice story.

Anonymous said...

nice story,I like it!

Anonymous said...

it was gd but u gave it a happy ending..