The night was still. Everyone in the flat was sleeping quietly. Even the cats and dogs were sleeping. Suddenly, crash! the vase in Madam Tan’s house broke. My brother was sleep walking around the house. Everyone woke up. The cats and dogs began fighting again.
There was no peace and quiet. My mother was scolding and shouting at my sickening brother. My father scold my mother, my sister tried to pick up but ended up hurt. What a mess it was! I just watch them fighting.
The next morning, neighbours and some people in the flat complained to the police about the noises. My family received a verbal warning from the police. At night, the night was still again. Suddenly, “Ahh!!” my sister screamed. A cockroach crawled up her mouth. Everyone woke up. I went to her room to check out what had happened. I told her it’s ok.
The next morning, the police came to my house and explained to my family that the neighbours wanted some sleep. At night, the night was noisy, “Hey shut up!” yelled Yanti to her mother. This time it was not my family. It was my neighbour. They were very noisy. My family was so furious. They now know what it is like to be noisy.
They regretted their action.
WRITTEN BY: Nur Irsyad 4 Honesty
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11 comments:
This story of yours is good.from kia wee
Hey you forgoten to but the word the after the and
EG> the cats and the dogs or did you mean it was raining cats and dogs?
>>>>>IVE FORGOTEEN TO WRITE MY NAME!! AT THE LAST COMMENT IM FROM SATRIA
That story was interesting.
>>NUR SYAHIRAH<<
hiyas, its minjun, Your story was nice. But maybe you should add more details. :-P
-Minjun
like your story
Not bad.The story was very good.But you forgot the 'THE END'.
Not bad.The story was very good.But you forgot the 'THE END'.
Great work! keep it up.
Elaine
i like your story. it is very intresting.
good, but your idiom is wrong
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