Monday, June 23, 2008

The Race By Hanif

One fine afternoon, Jake went to the notice board in his school. He saw a racing competition and was interested to join the race.The race track was two-hundred metres.Jake have to run ten rounds around the track. Jake trained hard for this race. He ran around his backyard. He also wore thin clothes like singlet.

“Sorry for this interruption, the two-hundred meter race will begin in two days.’’ Jake was ready for the race but he still will practice. Jake noticed his best friend, Tim, was in the race too. Jake wished him good luck. Tim was trained by his father. His father was quite an athlete.

It was the day of the race begins. Tim and Jake wore track shoes, a thin singlet with numbers, shorts with sporty design and a thick wristband. “Three, two, one and GO!!” shouted the coach. As they begin they sped up. Tim was first while Jake was second and the rest are way behind.

As soon as Jake and Tim went for their last round, they started to slow down, Tim accidentally trip of a small rock and fell. Jake saw him in pain. He may finish the race and win the trophy which is shiny as gold or help Tim up and let the others win. He ran as fast as he can to Tim and helped him up. The others dashed past them quickly. Jake sent Tim to the locker room. Tim appreciates his kindness. “Thanks for bringing me here. If it wasn’t for you I would have laid there for a long time.” Tim said. Jake replied “What are friends for?” After that they went home without bring back a trophy...

8 comments:

Anonymous said...

there were some mistakes but other than i liked it

-Zeeshan

SafiahArshad's Antics! said...

It is so sad that they did not win any trophy.. :-(

Anonymous said...

sorry to say this but i understand u were in a hurry but it was a little bit mistake EG After that they went home without bringing back a trophy...
-satria

Anonymous said...

I like your story,it is great

irsyad said...

the race is simply intresting!:)hundred thumps up!

ken lim said...

i agree with miss safiah's comment.

'After that they went home without bring back a trophy...'

you forgot to but the 'ing' for the word 'bring' above.

Anonymous said...

it;s nice and simple

Anonymous said...

This story is marvellous!