It was a stormy night. The thunder crashed and lightning roared. I was left alone at home watching some television shows while waiting for my parents to come back from work.Suddenly, I heard someone playing with my toy drum. I dashed down to see who that was. When I got down, I saw nobody but my drum and drumsticks lying on the floor. I picked them up and put them back to my music box.
Then I saw a small girl standing outside my window with its mouth sealed. I was shocked to see that. I closed my eye and counted to ten. When I opened my eyes, the girl disappeared. I ran into my room and locked the door.
Suddenly, I heard someone knocking on the door. I thought that it was my parents but it was not. When I went down and opened the door, I was shocked to see that it was a woman with blood all around her face. She came in, sat on my sofa, turned on the TV, and watched. I closed my eyes and wished that she would be gone. I dashed into the room and locked the door.
Soon my father and mother came back home. I told them what happened and they said that before this house was built, it was a graveyard.We decided to leave the spirit alone in the house.
Monday, June 23, 2008
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11 comments:
OMG Kia Wee Did you just repeat the IT WAS A STORMY NIGHT next time dont do the same mistake lolz
BY SATRIA
A marvallous story!A very tensed story.i love your story!But you should not put "it was a story night" because it sounded a bit akward.But so far so gd!Keep up the gd work!BRAVO!
A very nice,short and simple story with some amazing adjectives but the story is quite creepy to me.Kp up with ur gd wrk!
I made the change for Kia Wee already Satria. Thanks for noticing.. :-)
Irsyad, there was a mistake on Kia Wee's part. Thank you for noticing that. He made the change and changed it to "stormy".. :-)
Yes Syahirah.His use of adjectives are great! I love it too! Even Mdm Irwani loves his story too! The way he describes is marvellous!!
Ms Safiah
very good.
-Zeeshan
hiyas,your story was.. scary! But it was very nice.
-Minjun
Your voice is loud and clear,Kia Wee.
It is a scary story and it gives me the creeps.
Elaine
The story was good and simple but a little scary.Omigod,it even gave me goosebumps!
It is intersting but a little scarry.
i did not saw this type of stories before
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