Tuesday, July 15, 2008

Situational (by Muhd Syazwan)

All Saturday, Hussein and Aisha were so excited they could think and talk of nothing else. Their parents had promised to take them to the funfair!

On the next day, they went to the funfair by bus. There were game stalls everywhere. The funfair was filled with many people. Hussein and Aisha decided to ride the roller coaster first. They rode on the roller coaster so much until Hussein vomited. They decided to have a break for they were so hungry. Their father went to the food stall to buy some curry puffs." That was scrumptious," exclaimed Aisha.Next, they went to the haunted house. It was so scary until Aisha almost screamed her head off.

She screamed and screamed until the person who scared her ran away from her! " Ah!" The person shouted. Their father bought her a candyfloss to calm her down. They decided to go home because the funfair was closing. When they reached home, their mother and father were so tired until they were asleep. As for Hussein and Aisha, they did not enjoy much of the funfair.

12 comments:

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Nasheyl

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Nasheyl

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