Thursday, July 31, 2008

Situational Writing (Yusuf)

> ''Yay!''there is a running competition today'' ''Ben shouted. He has been training for months. He was excited. There are different sports to participate but Ben prefers running because he is good at it.
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> When he reaches the stadium, he saw a lot of people participate the running competition. Just then two big guys started asking him to challenge running with them.So, he accepted the challenge.''1, 2, 3 and go' one of the big guys shouted. They started running.Then, ben lose. The big guys won. Ben was disappointed.
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> He thought he cannot win the competition. The big guys teased him and make him angry. Ben just ignore them and continues with his practice. Just then, an announcement said' the running competition will be postponed till next week. Ben was so relieved that he still has time to practice. He kept continue to run around the stadium.Suddenly; he realized that he has run 4 rounds at the stadium.
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> He was totally shock. The next week was his competition. This time he is ready and have confident that he can win.''Go!'' the race started .Ben take over a lot of people now he was fourth. It is time to speed. He runs as fast as he legs could carry him and without stopping. Suddenly he was at the finishing line. He was surprised. He was so happy that he cannot forget it.

3 comments:

Anonymous said...

but wait.u had a few grammar mistakes.

Anonymous said...

Story is not so good But de ending is good n happy for me.

syafiq said...

wah