Sunday, July 06, 2008

Situational Writing (Chen Yang)

ONE SATURDAY MORNING, Hussein and Aisha were so excited they could think of nothing else. Their parents had promised to take them to the funfair.

When they arrived, they saw lots of people at the game stalls and they decided to try one game. At one of the game stalls, Hussein saw her friend Ann and they play at the funfair together.

In the afternoon, Hussein and aisha's parents had gone home, before they left, they passed the rest of their ticket to them. They were very happy because they can spent all the ticket by themselves and they can buy whatever they want.

After their parents left, they bought lots of food and toys, but they can't finish all that food all by themselves. After that, they were too tired to play or eat and they sat beside a tree. "Look! We still have half bag of food left!" Ann exclaimed. They tried to give some of the food to other people, but nobody wanted the food as they were leaving.

In the end, all three of them took a little food from the bag and bring them home. After the funfair, they learnt that do not buy the things that you need and do not buy too much.

13 comments:

Anonymous said...

Whose story is this?

Anonymous said...

nvm....

Anonymous said...

good story, kp up the good work

Arbiter said...

THIS STORY is not a bit meaning full like this paragraIn the end, all three of them took a little food from the bag and bring them home. After the funfair, they learnt that do not buy the things that you need and do not buy too much.

Arbiter said...

THIS STORY is not a bit meaning full like this paragraIn the end, all three of them took a little food from the bag and bring them home. After the funfair, they learnt that do not buy the things that you need and do not buy too much.

Arbiter said...

THIS STORY is not a bit meaning full like this paragraIn the end, all three of them took a little food from the bag and bring them home. After the funfair, they learnt that do not buy the things that you need and do not buy too much.

Senorita said...

nice story!!!!keep up the good work!

Anonymous said...

good but whose stoy?

Anonymous said...

whoever has wrote your story is nice but there are lots of grammer mistake. ( sorry if I hurt your feelings)

Anonymous said...

who's story is this? but i still like the story.

Anonymous said...

UR PARAGRHAPHING IS KINDA FUNNY

Anonymous said...

Quite good!

Anonymous said...

Not bad