Friday, July 04, 2008

The Ring ( by Aiman )

One early morning, I woke up and took a quick breakfast at a roti prata stall. After my breakfast, I went for a walk. While walking I decided to watch a movie called 'The Ring'. I took a bus to the cinema. The movie started at 1..00 pm and lasted for about three hours. The movie was great. I like the part when they were fighting for the Ring.

In the evening, I went for a walk at the beach with my brother. While walking barefooted, I felt I stepped on something. I took a look at it and found that it was a ring. I picked it up. It was dirty so I decided to bring it home. When I reached home, I cleaned the ring and noticed that the ring looked extraordinary. It has the shape of a mountain. I kept it in my drawer before going to sleep.

The next morning, after taking a shower, I took the ring I found the day before, from the drawer. I put the ring on my finger and started reading a book. About fifteen minutes later, suddenly I felt and saw something came out of the ring – a smoke. I also felt a funny kind of feelings happening to my body. Suddenly I heard some eerie sounds which I have no idea where it came from. I looked around but did not see anything around. I am so scared. I decided to take out the ring but could not. What has happened to me? I asked myself. I called my best friend Tom and told him to come over to my house.

When Tom reached my house, I told him about the ring and what has happened. We took a close look at the ring and saw a tiny button. I pressed the button and a map in the form of laser came out and it says, "If you put on the ring for more than fifteen minutes, it will be stuck there forever! The only way to take it off your finger is to drink the ring's antidote. The antidote could only be found in a cave near a mountain called Mount Kiasu. Look for a red bottle and drink its content." I was shocked. I tried to take out the ring from my finger but failed to do so. Tom and I decided that we must look for the antidote. I told my mother that I wanted to go cycling with Tom. We quickly went to the mountain mentioned and looked for the cave.

Once we saw a cave, we went in and looked for the red bottle. We searched every corner of the cave. Finally Tom found a red bottle hidden at one corner of the cave. Without wasting time, I drank the water in the bottle. Amazingly, the ring dropped off my finger by itself. We looked at each other and decided to leave the place immediately.

We quickly went to our bicycles which we parked at the foot of the mountain. We left the place without looking back.

10 comments:

Anonymous said...

very good story

Mystery Guy said...

thanks zeeshan

Mystery Guy=Aiman

Missey Lee said...

Wooo, This is a very exciting story~!
I really enjoyed it :)

Anonymous said...

not bad!what an adventure!

SafiahArshad's Antics! said...

YEs, I agree! What an adventure!.. hehe...

Thanks Miss Lee for replying too!!.. :-)

Anonymous said...

ooh i loved this story

Drago=satria

Anonymous said...

it is great n wat a great adventure

Anonymous said...

i agree with Diyanah.

By your friend
Ben

Anonymous said...

very nice, aiman

nasmenem said...

still a lot of grammar mistakes