All Saturday, Hussein and Aisha were so excited they could think and talk of nothing else. Their parents had promised to take them to the funfair! They were so excited until they can't wait.
When they went to the funfair, they saw that there are not many people because some the games things are broken. When they wanted to drink the water cooler, the water cooler machine was spoilt. They do not know what to do and they started thinking. Aisha has an idea, that is to tell everyone to work together and fix the games things together.
So, they told everyone to work together and fix the games things. Everyone listen to them and work together. Everyone was happy and they have fun.
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8 comments:
The story was okay but good job!
i agree with diyanah
Drago=satria
I argee with Diyanah too
Aiman's story is too short!
u also can write about them(charcters) playingthe games
2grammar mistakes but stiill quite good but a little bit tshortoo
GOOD
I like it Aiman it is a good story!
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