Saturday, July 05, 2008

situational writing(by Nur Syahirah)

All Saturday, Hussein and Aisha were so excited they could think and talk of nothing else. Their parents had promised to take them to the funfair!

Around 11.00 a.m,they got out of the house to go to the funfair. But along the highway, there was a heavy traffic jam. It was so terrible that it ended at 12.35 p.m. But, they still manage to reach there. Once they reached, Hussein and Aisha quickly took out the car's seat belt and ran out to see the view of the funfair. They said that they were so excited as they cannot wait to explore the funfair.

Hussein decided to play the Viking which an enormous boat is there an it will swing from front to the back like a rocking chair just that it is much more scarier. Aisha had decided to go into the Haunted House.

When the Viking had started to move very fast, Hussein became even more scared and frightened. He was born with asthma which he cannot take something that may cause him not to breath properly and, it was Aisha's turn to go inside the Haunted house. Actually, Aisha is afraid of the dark but just that she acted as if she was not afraid of it.

One hour and forty-five minutes had past by.It was time for them to end their games. When
Hussein came down from the Viking, he was breathless. Luckily, he brought his inhaler and quickly took it out. He was feeling a bit better now. The problem was that, Aisha was crying because of the darkness inside the Haunted House and the 'fake' ghosts, skeletons and coffins were scarying her.

After her parents and Hussein had persuaded her, she felt much more better and on the way home, they went to MacDonald's and ate there. Hussein and Aisha together expressed their feelings to their parents and told them that they were so pleased that they had brought them there although some problems had seemed to happened.

That night, Aisha wrote in her diary about where she had been to and what had happened there. Both Hussein and Aisha wished that they could go to that funfair again.

8 comments:

SafiahArshad's Antics! said...

"Hussein decided to play the Viking which an enormous boat is there an it will swing from front to the back like a rocking chair just that it is much more scarier."

I really like the way how you described the Viking. I could really imagine how big it is..

Ms Safiah

Anonymous said...

not bad!good job!
diyanah

Anonymous said...

The story was good!

Anonymous said...

gd stry not bad

satria

Anonymous said...

Your story is great

Anonymous said...

long story....But keep it out!






By your friend
Ben

Anonymous said...

Great job i think you can write a really good and intersting story but why 45 minutes for viking i think its less than 45 minutes!!!!!
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Anonymous said...

I LKED THE WAY U XPRESSED WHAT THEY WERE AFRAID OF AND WHAT THEY WERE BORN WITH