All Saturday Hussein and Aisha were so excited they could not think and talk of nothing else. Their parents had promised to take them to take them to the fun fair.
At about
The person in charge took out his hand phone and called the fire department. In a few minutes they came and got their ladder ready. One by one they all came down mostly with sad faces.
But Hussein and Aisha came down looking very happy. Their father asked them why and they said they were happy because they still came. The fun fair had to close for repairs. But would open two months later.
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12 comments:
Thanks Zeeshan for uploading your story... :-)
For your last paragraph, try not to start with "But"...
Other than that, I would say it is quite interesting...
yep!i think i agree with ms safiah!!!
but a wonderful story!!!!!!!!!
i agree with them
your story is quite nice but if can write longer also good
your story is fantastic zeeshan, keep it up.
mystery guy=Aiman
not bad.
diyanah
"Their parents had promised to take them to take them to the fun fair."
what does it mean?
i like urs
satria
geeat story
I mean 'GREAT STORY'
quite short
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